tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343628984772113522.post7763642692562005349..comments2023-11-02T04:23:22.498-07:00Comments on Daily Journey: Poem~Lightening!Bethe77http://www.blogger.com/profile/07908965956063875893noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343628984772113522.post-13664525053672746182012-03-30T06:58:25.102-07:002012-03-30T06:58:25.102-07:00Lightning can be beautiful... just like it is here...Lightning can be beautiful... just like it is here!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343628984772113522.post-3137175438602512122011-03-27T21:33:35.135-07:002011-03-27T21:33:35.135-07:00I enjoyed your butterfly cinquain.I enjoyed your butterfly cinquain.Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343628984772113522.post-86868740832235612362011-03-27T07:39:11.891-07:002011-03-27T07:39:11.891-07:00LIghtning doesn't scare me- it reminds me that...LIghtning doesn't scare me- it reminds me that I am NOT in charge! Thanks for your nice comments on my photo blog- and yes that cabin is just a one room cabin. Have a great Sunday!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343628984772113522.post-77725716166283177582011-03-27T02:50:13.369-07:002011-03-27T02:50:13.369-07:00Great attempt Beth. As JL says, your syllable cou...Great attempt Beth. As JL says, your syllable count drifts sometimes but the power and impact are definitely there. Well done.Pennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343628984772113522.post-43191986713694791672011-03-26T18:05:40.763-07:002011-03-26T18:05:40.763-07:00Much better Beth...
Not sure if you mean lightning...Much better Beth...<br />Not sure if you mean lightning, as a strike, or lightening as to lighten... One has an extra syllable. You may want to re check the count on a couple of the lines, but you are really starting to get the hang of it !! Keep it up !<br /><br />Your words make me want to see the lightning storms we are expecting... Well done !<br /><br />JL&BJL Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12713220952100680871noreply@blogger.com