tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343628984772113522.post904388420276358204..comments2023-11-02T04:23:22.498-07:00Comments on Daily Journey: Short Story Slam Week 8Bethe77http://www.blogger.com/profile/07908965956063875893noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343628984772113522.post-29093325381997736612011-08-23T12:20:57.796-07:002011-08-23T12:20:57.796-07:00wonderful piece and lovely take on the prompt!!wonderful piece and lovely take on the prompt!!e.a.s. demershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16009167844130542312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343628984772113522.post-48493362205817081002011-08-20T16:49:34.620-07:002011-08-20T16:49:34.620-07:00love the enthusiasm in your words.
profound entry....love the enthusiasm in your words.<br />profound entry.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343628984772113522.post-70889474990505081312011-08-20T06:39:10.556-07:002011-08-20T06:39:10.556-07:00This is heartwarming and paints such a lovely pict...This is heartwarming and paints such a lovely picture of the two dancing about in the field amongst the wheat ... :)MISHhttp://writer-in-transit.co.za/bluebell-sss-prompt-no-8-blind/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343628984772113522.post-63166521014624534732011-08-18T06:50:52.559-07:002011-08-18T06:50:52.559-07:00Beautiful, Beth! This song-like poem makes me see ...Beautiful, Beth! This song-like poem makes me see dancer's waltzing and twirling among the wheat. Very nice!<br /><br />Here is my week 8 story: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/amber-waves-of-grain/Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/amber-waves-of-grain/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343628984772113522.post-79459272745813888082011-08-18T06:20:33.213-07:002011-08-18T06:20:33.213-07:00Swirling around
Dancing to the song of the wind
Sw...Swirling around<br />Dancing to the song of the wind<br />Swirling around in the wheat<br />Dreaming of the love<br /><br /><br />positive and creative, you rock.<br /><br />:)Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343628984772113522.post-16433377145811025952011-08-17T20:48:04.963-07:002011-08-17T20:48:04.963-07:00What a lovely piece, Beth. Wind and whispered lov...What a lovely piece, Beth. Wind and whispered love... I could almost hear the wheat sssss-ing in the field, see the smile on the girl's invisible face. And I haven't been on a wheat field in a very long time :) Thanks!Guilie Castillohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09006999087139126972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343628984772113522.post-26440599970996948112011-08-17T11:59:07.738-07:002011-08-17T11:59:07.738-07:00Loved this song of wind and love. Beautiful!Loved this song of wind and love. Beautiful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com