Short Story Slam Week 9
Bluebell Books
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Image Credit: Art at google.com Draped in white satin, trimmed in lace Sweeping beauty As dusk fades into evening Lantern in tote As the sunsets upon the horizon I watch you sail into the deep blue sea As the tides roll in and out The wind whispers Sweet goodbyes With gentle brushed kisses O the sweet scent of sea salt Each breeze sweetly brushes across my cheek Each a reminder of cherished love As the sunsets upon the sea Multi-colors of sea mist blue As the misty pink blue sky Rolls into one upon the horizon Until both are one As the love we share As I watch you sail into the night With sails set for sea The horizon blends into one As I long to be upon this sea barren voyage As I long for the touch of your love As you melt into the horizon Into unknown seas The thunder rolls As I turn to go As I long for your touch One more time The sweet smell of sea salt upon your lips ~Beth~ |
Do you you enjoy watching the sea?
Very descriptive. You really captured the image. Good work!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful writing, Beth. The image is reflected nicely in your words. Very vivid.
ReplyDeleteMy slam 9 entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/31/dearest-john-2/
Those words captured the image so well my friend. Brilliant!
ReplyDeletesuch deep romantic yearning - precious.
ReplyDeleteOh Beth, your words are so descriptive. They paint a picture in one's mind as they are read. Lovely poem. As always, your choice of songs is great and I love to listen to them as I am writing a comment. Have a lovely weekend. Mickie :)
ReplyDeletestunning.
ReplyDeletelovely. you captured the details and spin it with love :)
ReplyDeletelove the word flow.
ReplyDeletebeautiful story.
Your words did such a tribute to the image. I love your poem and the expression you used.
ReplyDeletehttp://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/05/the-milky-seas/
Beautifully shared.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful piece! And, an excellent take on the prompt! Well done :-)
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