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Monday, October 3, 2011

Saturday Centus With Jenny Matlock

A few days late! But have manged to put together and get this challenge put together. It is getting hard to keep up. I thank each and all of you for your continued support as my schedule hasn't allowed me much time. I appreciate each and all of you so much and look forward when I can catch up once again; when my work scheduling eases up. Have an awesome week!



WORD COUNT - 100 WORDS PLUS THE TEN WORDS OF THE PROMPT. Total word count not to exceed 110 words.
STYLE OF WRITING - ANY
USE A PICTURE THIS WEEK IF YOU LIKE
THE PROMPT THIS WEEK IS: "The number you have reached is no longer in service"



As I picked up the phone to call home
My heart was pounding
Racing with the last words spoken
Had I only said what was on my heart
Not what was out of angry pain and rage
Then I wouldn't be lost to my family
It had been ten years since we last spoke
As I raced out of the house
As the door slammed behind me
I swore I would never look back or call
But life has changed
I need to talk with them
I need them to know about the baby
She has so little time
The automated recording rang across the the line
"The number you have reached is no longer in service"

~Beth~

Have you ever said something or left with unfinished business that you wish you could take back and change?

Jenny Matlock




11 comments:

The Cello Strings said...

amazing.

thanks for sharing.

Ben Ditty said...

Amazing what you got out of that message!

Nonna Beach said...

Outstanding and so much packed into so few words...Bravo !!!

cj Schlottman said...

A beautifully written poem that ends with with a tragic twist. Well done, Beth.

Namaste..........cj

Viki said...

This was very sad but well written. I can feel the torment. Good job.

Judie said...

Beth, this so beautifully written, but so very sad! You are such a creative writer.

Rawknrobyn.blogspot.com said...

This is so desperately sad and powerful, very real. Great job.
xoRobyn

Karen S. said...

Oh yes....how does that saying go...spoken words are like tooth paste...once they leave your mouth you can't put them back in....this is a great centus! Thanks....nicely written!

Reflections said...

Wow! This is such a pull at the heartstrings! Powerful, sad, longing to find them in time... fabulous share.

Sue said...

Good job with a sad but true message.

=)

Jenny said...

Sad and powerful words!

This felt so believable. My eyes are teary...what a horrid circumstance. And one I hope is not based on fact!

Thank you for sharing this. It was brilliant.