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Draped in white satin, trimmed in lace
Sweeping beauty
As dusk fades into evening
Lantern in tote
As the sunsets upon the horizon
I watch you sail into the deep blue sea
As the tides roll in and out
The wind whispers
Sweet goodbyes
With gentle brushed kisses
O the sweet scent of sea salt
Each breeze sweetly brushes across my cheek
Each a reminder of cherished love
As the sunsets upon the sea
Multi-colors of sea mist blue
As the misty pink blue sky
Rolls into one upon the horizon
Until both are one
As the love we share
As I watch you sail into the night
With sails set for sea
The horizon blends into one
As I long to be upon this sea barren voyage
As I long for the touch of your love
As you melt into the horizon
Into unknown seas
The thunder rolls
As I turn to go
As I long for your touch
One more time
The sweet smell of sea salt upon your lips
~Beth~ |
Do you you enjoy watching the sea?
11 comments:
Very descriptive. You really captured the image. Good work!
Beautiful writing, Beth. The image is reflected nicely in your words. Very vivid.
My slam 9 entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/31/dearest-john-2/
Those words captured the image so well my friend. Brilliant!
such deep romantic yearning - precious.
Oh Beth, your words are so descriptive. They paint a picture in one's mind as they are read. Lovely poem. As always, your choice of songs is great and I love to listen to them as I am writing a comment. Have a lovely weekend. Mickie :)
stunning.
lovely. you captured the details and spin it with love :)
love the word flow.
beautiful story.
Your words did such a tribute to the image. I love your poem and the expression you used.
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/05/the-milky-seas/
Beautifully shared.
A wonderful piece! And, an excellent take on the prompt! Well done :-)
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