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Thursday, September 1, 2011

Short Story Slam Week 9

Short Story Slam Week 9

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Image Credit: Art at google.com


Draped in white satin, trimmed in lace
Sweeping beauty
As dusk fades into evening
Lantern in tote
As the sunsets upon the horizon
I watch you sail into the deep blue sea
As the tides roll in and out
The wind whispers
Sweet goodbyes
With gentle brushed kisses
O the sweet scent of sea salt 
Each breeze sweetly brushes across my cheek
Each a reminder of cherished love
As the sunsets upon the sea
Multi-colors of sea mist blue
As the misty pink blue sky
Rolls into one upon the horizon
Until both are one
As the love we share
As I watch you sail into the night
With sails set for sea
The horizon blends into one 
As I long to be upon this sea barren voyage
As I long for the touch of your love
As you melt into the horizon
Into unknown seas
The thunder rolls
As I turn to go
As I long for your touch
One more time
The sweet smell of sea salt upon your lips

~Beth~
Do you you enjoy watching the sea?

Jingle Poetry


11 comments:

earthlingwrites said...

Very descriptive. You really captured the image. Good work!

charleslmashburn said...

Beautiful writing, Beth. The image is reflected nicely in your words. Very vivid.

My slam 9 entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/31/dearest-john-2/

Thisisme. said...

Those words captured the image so well my friend. Brilliant!

Paige said...

such deep romantic yearning - precious.

forgetmenot said...

Oh Beth, your words are so descriptive. They paint a picture in one's mind as they are read. Lovely poem. As always, your choice of songs is great and I love to listen to them as I am writing a comment. Have a lovely weekend. Mickie :)

The Cello Strings said...

stunning.

bendedspoon said...

lovely. you captured the details and spin it with love :)

Morning said...

love the word flow.

beautiful story.

Ann LeFlore said...

Your words did such a tribute to the image. I love your poem and the expression you used.

http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/05/the-milky-seas/

Reflections said...

Beautifully shared.

e.a.s. demers said...

A wonderful piece! And, an excellent take on the prompt! Well done :-)