Todays Prompt is FIRST AND LAST

JL, over at "Dodge Writes"; has another wonderful prompt for us. I'm so glad she is back up and running. I missed her while she was down. As I sure many others did as well. She has wonderful challenges to stretch our writing skills and imagination. She has wrote a brilliant piece today with this prompt. You most go check her blog out her writing skills are so worth it. She is a lovely writer.

The rules are you must use this line as the first AND last line in your write...
Today's line is CAN'T YOU SEE MY WORLD IS CRUMBLING... You may use prose or poetry...

Can't you see my world is crumbling

I've begged

I've pleaded

I've cried

I've been on bended knee

Where are you I say

Where are you

Don't you hear my pleas

My pain is deep

I need you NOW

Cant you see all this pain

All this loss

How my world is crumbling

You said you would never leave me

I ask where are you then?

You softly answered

I've never left you my child

I have been right here beside you

I've heard you

I've heard your pleas and begging

I've seen each tear

As it fell

I've captured each one

As a diamond in my hand

I've been next to you in bended knee

Pleading to the Father

Touch my child

Can't you see her world is crumbling

My child, I say

Look up and touch His hem

Your pain and loss is no more

He will take this burdened from you

His strength and peace He will leave

Each plea and each cry will be filled with His love

No longer will you beg
No longer will you plead
No more tears will you shed
Of the pain and loss 
Your cry will no longer be

Can't you see my world is crumbling

~Beth~

Are there times you feel the Lord doesn't hear your cry?



http://dodgewrites.blogspot.com/