Much better Beth... Not sure if you mean lightning, as a strike, or lightening as to lighten... One has an extra syllable. You may want to re check the count on a couple of the lines, but you are really starting to get the hang of it !! Keep it up !
Your words make me want to see the lightning storms we are expecting... Well done !
LIghtning doesn't scare me- it reminds me that I am NOT in charge! Thanks for your nice comments on my photo blog- and yes that cabin is just a one room cabin. Have a great Sunday!
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Much better Beth...
Not sure if you mean lightning, as a strike, or lightening as to lighten... One has an extra syllable. You may want to re check the count on a couple of the lines, but you are really starting to get the hang of it !! Keep it up !
Your words make me want to see the lightning storms we are expecting... Well done !
JL&B
Great attempt Beth. As JL says, your syllable count drifts sometimes but the power and impact are definitely there. Well done.
LIghtning doesn't scare me- it reminds me that I am NOT in charge! Thanks for your nice comments on my photo blog- and yes that cabin is just a one room cabin. Have a great Sunday!
I enjoyed your butterfly cinquain.
Lightning can be beautiful... just like it is here!
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